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Helen: I wrote quite part of it, it would be better if you review it. Thanks you.
Great work Dongsheng and Jerome - very well-written :-)
I've just reworded it a little. I think this issue can be closed now. Thanks Helen for reviewing and cleaning/rewording :) I close this issue.
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Helen and Jerome, can you review this for readability?